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wordwizard
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0 posted 2004-03-14 06:56 PM



There is a sense in the fast paced society
noted among artists with all do piety,
that one has to succeed before a certain age
make it in the cruel world, reach center stage

So unconsciously, I still don battle gear
to greet competitors while I keep clear,
of any abrasive talk, and to take stock
of eventual artistic change within given range


It runs along with man who silently ages
substantiated by past and present sages;
better to keep ones head crystal clear
accept new challenges without fear.

What!, be consumed by the lack of eternal vibrancy
to lament the bodily decay of a younger man!
I choose to expand, acquire new expressions
to then observe continual impressions....





[This message has been edited by wordwizard (03-15-2004 09:18 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2004-03-14 07:06 PM


"I choose to expand, acquire new expressions"

~ then you, dear poet, will stay young forever! ~ but have the wisdom of your age!

Love & Light,
EA

Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-14 07:42 PM


A clever and good write.
wordwizard
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3 posted 2004-03-14 09:53 PM


Linda,

thank you my friendly angel

Grover

pleasure to hear you like what you read...


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4 posted 2004-03-14 09:55 PM


Oh so clever a write Martin.
Much enjoyed!
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

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5 posted 2004-03-14 10:08 PM


Very well written thoughts. Enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
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6 posted 2004-03-15 12:32 PM


And me, too (excepting, of course, I'm not a man).  Very much enjoyed this write, wordwizard!
DavePage
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7 posted 2004-03-15 11:58 AM


Not unfortunately just - dont hire, but the image you are soft, take what they hell is done to you, and become an imbecile at the stroke of a clock or the tender thoughts of immaturity.

Dave

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