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WildPoet
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0 posted 2004-03-14 02:46 PM


Fading behind unseen
Below life’s tempered sheen
Unnoticed, unsung
Silent bells not rung

Overlooked in haste
Knowledge gone to waste
Stored in undyed cotton
Are efforts long forgotten

Rushing on your way
Hearing not what they say
Losing colorful parts
Of cries within their hearts


WilPoet



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1 posted 2004-03-14 03:06 PM


that's so true and so sad
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2 posted 2004-03-14 03:44 PM


The essence of Time
Woven into the rhyme
Lost in reverie
...wasted poetry

Enjoyed this!  ~K~

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3 posted 2004-03-14 03:47 PM


oooooo a juicy poem , great topic and write

-wolf

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4 posted 2004-03-14 04:27 PM


Oh yes! Enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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5 posted 2004-03-14 10:37 PM


yes u speak of this well
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6 posted 2004-03-15 12:25 PM


WildPoet -- I thought this was a gem!  I also liked Kahlil's response to it.  
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7 posted 2004-03-15 12:28 PM


im nodding my head
you are so right....enjoyed this

WildPoet
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8 posted 2004-03-16 02:41 AM


Thanks everyone! I've enjoyed your responses!

WildPoet

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