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lovejunkie
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 93
Indiana

0 posted 2004-03-13 01:44 PM


            The mold
No desire to break it
Crack it
tear it in two

No desire to fill it
form to its curves
seep into it
become your doll

Poseable and bendable
with no desire to move

Sits on shelf
with no fear of falling
and no desire to fly

No will to stay still

Sun has no reason to shine
But look
Here she is again
Moon has no reason
to light up the nights

Secrets of an empty mind

"You don't feel anything"
...but
"But I feel it all the time..."

"All you need is love..." -The Beatles

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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-03-13 02:10 PM


Some really nice images here!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-03-13 02:16 PM


sad stuff here...I like it
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-03-13 04:38 PM


Nothing sad about this

Strident, I can do, I will do, up yours if you dont like it

Yes

dave

exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
4 posted 2004-03-13 06:36 PM


it makes me think,and i like that.
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since 2003-08-09
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5 posted 2004-03-16 08:43 PM


reminds me of me on a sad dark rainy night looking out a window onto the street...watching it rain ,  hearing the pitter patter of the drops everywhere

.......
JDW III

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