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Open Poetry #31

Faded Love Letter

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2004-03-12 06:47 PM

Walking down to the waters edge
hanging my head
over your sweet love letter
but it doesn’t mean as much
as it used to
because
like you
it’s faded
I only hope
it too
won’t disappear

BloomingRose

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-03-12 06:52 PM

Softly told..a sad remember.
Good to see you here Deb!
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2004-03-12 07:09 PM

This is such a sad write.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

3 posted 2004-03-12 07:31 PM

Thanks for reading. I guess it is sad... Didn't really think about that when I wrote it.
Just remembering.

Hugs,
Deb

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-03-13 02:10 PM

Oh, so pretty the echo...
Nice write.
TD

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-03-13 08:23 PM

oh, this just grabbed my little heart...
so sweetly written, but still so sad

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-03-14 02:17 PM

time does that

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2004-03-14 05:46 PM

I have a few love letters...from a different time and place in my life...

If I were to read them to him, I wonder if he too would cry.

M

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