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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2004-03-12 06:47 PM



Walking down to the waters edge
hanging my head
over your sweet love letter
but it doesn’t mean as much
as it used to
because
like you
it’s faded
I only hope
it too
won’t disappear

BloomingRose

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1 posted 2004-03-12 06:52 PM


Softly told..a sad remember.
Good to see you here Deb!
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

SmartChick
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2 posted 2004-03-12 07:09 PM


This is such a sad write.
BloomingRose
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3 posted 2004-03-12 07:31 PM


Thanks for reading. I guess it is sad... Didn't really think about that when I wrote it.
Just remembering.

Hugs,
Deb

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-03-13 02:10 PM


Oh, so pretty the echo...
Nice write.
TD

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5 posted 2004-03-13 08:23 PM


oh, this just grabbed my little heart...
so sweetly written, but still so sad

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6 posted 2004-03-14 02:17 PM


time does that
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7 posted 2004-03-14 05:46 PM


I have a few love letters...from a different time and place in my life...

If I were to read them to him, I wonder if he too would cry.

M

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