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A Mixture of Words
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A Mixture of Words |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I spent the day in remembrances until we reached the end and she said "You know what I really want... An Eulogy" as my mind raced forward to its meaning then backwords over substance trying to mask the surprise in my voice and block the pains from being more than just my aching back stabbing at me. And so another promise to fulfill when next we meet, with her words, mixed with mine, maybe in some sort of patterned rhyme. For she said to me she doesn't want to be visited at a graveside, but rather "in the heart". M *some days I need more than the empty house and a scream. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
For there she will be with you always... This touched me deeply. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just touching...very heartfelt |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This was....beautiful. I can't think of anything better to say. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Maureen?  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
And with this poem, that is accomplished. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love that ending Maureen......Nicely done Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you all for caring~~ hugs M |
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