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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Open your Heart Expression placing treasures, smiling like a lamp Oxidized atoms clad in hallowed elements Sun-flooded autonomy, fingering lengths Curling harmonic in the arms of keepsakes Warming circles of life, ingesting the hours Soothed to logic, from a mind that is ours Flashing on tufts of spring blossoming scents Hearing, considering, and touching events Words breathing double unimaginable things Leaping quit green within feelings of trees Ripeness swelling a love for this world Like soft busy heather, alive in God’s pearls A tender gravity, gesturing care to our friends Awakening journeys from day to day’s blend Cloth of radiance, natural fibers of dreams Embracing consolation in failures they clean Meanings ooze richness and golden-haired strength Combing potential, keen militia of wavelengths Boisterous passions indicative of Discovering flavor in “all” meanings of love~ Hatchlings of life in the new poem of spring Inspiring a way into summers true blending Collecting colorful leaves with the urge of autumn For the inventive mind of winter’s white spectrum Language…the entire charisma in your eyes Spawning communiqué of intellectual surprise Fragrance of integrity espousing most fair Mantras of the Goddesses filling the air |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
o yes the goddesses are heralding in the spring, how lyrically loverly this is |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ "Language…the entire charisma in your eyes Spawning communiqué of intellectual surprise Fragrance of integrity espousing most fair Mantras of the Goddesses filling the air" Wonderful write, enjoye. Good morning. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yes! I love this style, format...it's great! Looks good on you Lee! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Inspiring a way into summers true blending Collecting colorful leaves with the urge of autumn For the inventive mind of winter’s white spectrum Lee, this is so beautiful...the whole poem is. I love the rhyme and the way you separated the verses. It's really pretty.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ Everything you pen is beauty-in-the-knowing~ Lovely, indeed~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I may not have fully understood the words, they were complex enough without the meaning of the words to ask me why I was doing and what I hoped to achieve by doing it but somethings you do and this is my understanding of your words. ******************************* Science and timing spring rebirth for organisms False rich images still nature as people provide food for others to feed others The shape not the content defines their eating habits but with integrity shining through self-interest The world will survive Dave |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lee, you have such a command of the English Language...delightful to read *s M |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I love the spectrum of the seasons that you had in here.  ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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