Open Poetry #31 |
Two Lovers Unite |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * The clock struck from the ivory tower Beneath the moon at midnight hour My lover's kiss I seek so fine His touch upon my skin divine From here above the balcony I search below and there is thee With words of verse you speak of love My heart uplifted to the heavens above Just one kiss from my handsome one Before this night is over and done The stars that light the galaxy Could not compare to the light of thee As the bells toll and signal your leave I'll wear your heart upon my sleeve Until the morrow you'll return 'til then my love for you I'll yearn * * * "Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation" I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Sue, this is so beautiful. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hello Sue... This is just SO beautiful... Love the way you write romance. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I love the romance in this. Lovely pic too. Deb |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good. Enjoyed reading the beautiful rhyme! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
ohhhhhhh! This makes me happy and sad. the sad is my fault though. (sigh) @); |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Yet again Sue you show your exceptional talent for writing love poetry....brilliantly rymed and full of desire and passion.... Thank you for your words of love.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are so passionately romantic! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Sue: I commented on this one, but for some reason, it didn't attach. It reminds me of an old poem called The Highwayman. Really charming! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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