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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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0 posted 2004-03-12 04:58 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

The clock struck from the ivory tower
Beneath the moon at midnight hour
My lover's kiss I seek so fine
His touch upon my skin divine

From here above the balcony
I search below and there is thee
With words of verse you speak of love
My heart uplifted to the heavens above

Just one kiss from my handsome one
Before this night is over and done
The stars that light the galaxy
Could not compare to the light of thee

As the bells toll and signal your leave
I'll wear your heart upon my sleeve
Until the morrow you'll return
'til then my love for you I'll yearn

* * *

"Ever has it been that love
knows not its own depth
until the hour of separation"



I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2004-03-12 05:26 PM


Oh Sue, this is so beautiful.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-03-12 06:01 PM


Hello Sue...
This is just SO beautiful...
Love the way you write romance.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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Florida
3 posted 2004-03-12 07:24 PM


I love the romance in this. Lovely pic too.

Deb

Grover
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4 posted 2004-03-12 09:08 PM


Very good. Enjoyed reading the beautiful rhyme!
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
5 posted 2004-03-12 09:48 PM


ohhhhhhh!

This makes me happy and sad. the sad is my fault though. (sigh)

@);

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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6 posted 2004-03-13 05:12 AM


Yet again Sue you show your exceptional talent for writing love poetry....brilliantly rymed and full of desire and passion....

Thank you for your words of love....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-03-13 05:20 AM


you are so passionately romantic!
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8 posted 2004-03-17 11:55 PM


Dear Sue:  I commented on this one, but for some reason, it didn't attach.  It reminds me of an old poem called The Highwayman. Really charming!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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