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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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ruthless; the long winter months that leave behind a grey trail of scattered colourless leaves and scrawny denuded trees aimless; I stand clad in warmth on this sprawling veranda balancing my body mass on the secure balustrade distant; the tall mountain shines reflecting sun’s knowing smile while a crisp gentle breeze pats the back of my roving thoughts that straddle my age of youth evoking karmic musings |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
distant; the tall mountain shines reflecting sun’s knowing smile while a crisp gentle breeze pats the back of my roving thoughts that straddle my age of youth evoking karmic musings It sounds wonderful my smilin' friend. I see you are in Belgium now?!! Studying or visiting? How exciting! hugs, Chris For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks Chris, my friend... actually, I have been in Belgium since 1999... only of late (some 9 months or so back) I added that info at PiP... Regards Sudhir |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
and I never noticed it? Duh!  Boy is my face red! LOL. Well, still that is wonderful that you are in such a beautiful place....not that I have been there or anything...just seen pics...but....oh I am rambling. LOL. Thanks for clearing that up. Hugs! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HEY YOU!!! whats up groovy guy.. love the vocabulary and imagery in this Sud, good to read you my friend. I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi there, Sudhir! I really enjoyed your "karmic musings"! ~ and I loved the title!  Huggums, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"distant; the tall mountain shines reflecting sun’s knowing smile while a crisp gentle breeze pats the back of my roving thoughts" Wonderful imagery...fantastic write. Very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Many thanks dear friends... Regards Sudhir |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
Very nice; the images are powerful and stick in the mind! "I am the hobbyhorse. I am the stapler in the mud, the toad in your brain." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Hmmmmm. smiles. Juju |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
It painted a picture in my mind, how beautiful!  WOW! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Suddy, there's always been something about your writing that says just a hint more of what you really want to say.... go ahead, my friend, delve.... I am waiting. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a terrific piece |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you should visit more often..your words are like music for the eyes... *s M |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I thank you all so very much... Your thoughts and words are much appreciated... Regards Sudhir |
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