Open Poetry #31 |
Ranting Ravens Rap Recital |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Rap rappa rap rap! Thonk thonk, Thonk thonk! Qwork qworka qwork qwork! Caulk caulk, Caulk caulk! Kek kek kek kek kek. Kek kek kek kek! Thoinka thoinka. Thoink thoink. Pop pop pop rappa rap. Qwork qwork qwork. Thonk thonk! Thoinka thoinka thoinka. Caulk caulk. Poppa rappa kek kek! Qwork! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Death by Litterbation... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFLMAO! Not to mention by flying litter! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Like in the old days of American Bandstand, I give it a 7, it has a beat you can dance to. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, thanks Nan! that's about three more than the ravens gave it this morning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
It must be the latitude, ya think? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Midnite You sure you don't live under my morning window?? This was great! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Loved the title and the thoinka (at least I thinka it was a thoinka!) I have appreciation of the detail of sound and thought given here. I tried to depict the creeking, bumping sounds of my van going down our half mile gravel lane. It was not easy! Truthfully, I couldn't do it! You did well with those ranting ravens! I liked this creative write. To the library for a time that I want to hear a playful sound... Sadie |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ROFLMAO at Duncan.... Kacy...only you, m'dear...only you... and... yes, I'm still doing Windows... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, hope everyone here gets a chance to know the group Corvus and their rap sheet. (yep, a pun in here) |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Original and rythmic! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks, Grover! It was a fun write. |
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