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The Reason There's A Why
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The Reason There's A Why |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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The Reason Theres a Why When I expose my feelings something inside of me tells me I won't be the same. I read the morning news I get the longing blues too many thoughts I can't explain. Give me good news where can it take me what can it do for me to make me a man. The worst won't break me but never escape me the rest can heal me and I can heal the rest. When I see a moonbeam above a silent stream like a vision in the night, I see the wisdom I see the everything I see the only peace in sight. It's there I get thinking what makes it all so bold when you're living the gift of life those precious times glow Lord I'd like to know where I'm going by good-bye. Give me good news where can it take me what can it do for me to make me a man the worst won't break me never escape me the rest can heal me I can heal the rest. And if I stayed there I'd never get anywhere but I can come back in time. It's in that moonbeam it's in that silent stream it's in the reason there's a why. © Eric True Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome "it's in the reason there's a why." The answer is the question. Enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When I expose my feelings something inside of me tells me I won't be the same. ~*~ I recollect asking my father "why"... Now? I know. Smiling. Thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When I expose my feelings something inside of me tells me I won't be the same. I read the morning news I get the longing blues too many thoughts I can't explain. Give me good news where can it take me what can it do for me to make me a man. The worst won't break me but never escape me the rest can heal me and I can heal the rest. When I see a moonbeam above a silent stream like a vision in the night, I see the wisdom I see the everything I see the only peace in sight. It's there I get thinking what makes it all so bold when you're living the gift of life those precious times glow Lord I'd like to know where I'm going by good-bye. ================================== Eric..this is such a wisdom filled, soulful write... I just love this ones humility and tenderness... vulnerability wrapped in rhyme excellent groovy guy. (was at your homepage this morn.. you know where to find me, right?)  I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"It's in that moonbeam it's in that silent stream it's in the reason there's a why." The questioning never stops. This is the way we are ... attracted by the mysteries, the why why why And deep within, our soul knows. This is beautiful and thought provoking. Love, Margherita |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Yes...there is a reason indeed!!! A wonderful write!!! Enjoyed!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very thought-provoking |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Eric, You always put forth such wonderful and vast insight through your writes. Always appealing, and well needed these days. Liked this. TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I loved this E... the read, so smooth and rhymed in just the right places...I could almost sing it(if only I could sing) M |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
lots of well written thought provoking lines here - love pondering poems - Paul |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
heartbeat heard moonbeams reveal the real appeal of the nightsky a chance to take an honest look back at the day |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
flows nicely yet full of insight |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"And if I stayed there I'd never get anywhere but I can come back in time. It's in that moonbeam it's in that silent stream it's in the reason there's a why." Eric, I really enjoyed this write, especially the way you sumed things up! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's in that moonbeam it's in that silent stream it's in the reason there's a why. Aww yes, natures beauty at it's best.... Very much enjoyed, ethome~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks very much to all for the kind words and thoughts I really appreciate it so much! Eric |
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