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A Bit at a Time |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC 
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My love for you grows Like a great kudzu vine Unchecked by space Unhindered by time My mind never stops The wheels ever turning My heart and my soul Are for you always yearning The insecurity I feel Is something quite new I've bared my soul to none As I've bared it to you Everything that you say Everything that you do weighs on my mind I don't know what to do Are you still holding back Do you still have reservation Should I express myself more Should I show my elation It would help if I knew what's going on in your mind I don't expect all at once Just a bit at a time "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
oops, did it twice, sorry "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The insecurity I feel Is something quite new I've bared my soul to none As I've bared it to you Liked that verse most of all. It's hard to know, and harder to say. Good work joe~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...a James Taylor man...after my own heart... nice write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Joe...good to read you once again. Good one..much enjoyed! Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
What a nice love poem. How could anyone expect more than this? It's hard to open up, and the other person doesn't, but maybe soon. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Great emotion in this write! I liked it very much! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That is an adorable photo of you and your daughter ~ and the poem is adorable as well! ~ So sweet, unassuming and tender.  Warm hugs, EA |
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