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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-03-11 01:19 AM



mélange tennos

misshapen mélange of potionless dreams
spent in scenes of emotionless schemes

unshaken in comfort; unrelentless in pain
vapors of vesper-like visions implode,
settle to rudiment’s portionless domain
and lessen the laugh of the rage-driven load

mirrored about on echoes of mindless portent
full to the lap-tongued lip of a tea-saged dish
wafting the breezes of cloudless content,
hawking the dove of peace on pirated wish

unyielding in pithyless epics of stir-tied ropes
encircling the bounds that loose the binds,
completing the circuits of powerless hopes
and melding the molds of moribund kinds



© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2004-03-11 01:41 AM


A soulful write steavenr~

*enjoyed*

Snow
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2 posted 2004-03-11 01:48 AM


WOW!!!! i wish this was on my site so i could award it... all i can do is


:::standing ovation:::::
Bravo!!!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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3 posted 2004-03-11 02:58 AM


standing up with Snow
Grover
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4 posted 2004-03-11 12:46 PM


Way to go!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-03-11 12:59 PM


Bravo!!  This is fantastic!
Wonderful write Steaven!
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-03-11 01:02 PM


Excellent write, steaven.
I thouroughly enjoy your poetry.
Hugs  
Ethel

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