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Spring Haiku
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Spring Haiku |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
out of the cold gloom a solitary tree frog a hearld of Spring |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...and life begins its cycle anew...nicely done |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Bring on the spring! enjoyed this write, especially on this snow/rain combo slushy day |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
INclan~ So VERY good to see you and to have you bring us these beautiful thoughts is a special blessing~ I've missed you ...~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent...much enjoyed~ Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
A welcome herald!  ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
out of the cold gloom a solitary tree frog a hearld of Spring Nice positive feeling...~P |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
a wonderful glimpse of spring....missed you here, INclan, hope to read more from you soon. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Nice to read you again INclan... Welcome back.  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes...spring is here... I just hope we don't get hit with a spring snow...  Very, very nice. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Herald-- what an appropriate word! Grover. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
That is one of the sounds of spring I wait to hear. The thrill single-noted song deep in the damp woodlands. Well done INclan. believe in what your heart feels... |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Thank you all who took the time to read and comment. As always, I am in your debt. INclan |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Your poem inspired me, but I didn't comment on it - yet. So...I like it. I like the line "out of the cold gloom" especially. I'm so curious though...what do these tree frogs look like - the only ones I've seen are bright and at the pet store. Good job. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well the one that I saw the other night wasn't so solitary...he jumped from the tree as I walked by, and rode on my back for awhile. nice write |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely!  How colorful it is! Love, Margherita |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Very nice one, enjoyed it very much Charisma |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I can see it! I can feel it! I love it!  Spring's a comin'! Warm hugs, EA P.S. I believe you have a little typo ~ "hearld" -- herald? |
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