Open Poetry #31 |
grace |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
reaching down to mercy’s perch lifting lost in grace’s touch, pulling wand’ring souls to higher planes, alit by her long-suffering torch |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
oooooooooooooh! This is terrific! Loved it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome format! great theme! very creative! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh you know this is good!! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent! Very well-written! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very well written steaven! Love this! Chris For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul. -- Judy Garland |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...reaches down and lifts one up... Warm hugs, EA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Very creative write, love it! Charisma |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I liked the visual steps the lines were takaing you down as you read. NICE!! |
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