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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-03-09 10:41 PM


reaching down
     to mercy’s perch
          lifting lost in grace’s
               touch, pulling wand’ring
                    souls to higher planes, alit
                         by her long-suffering torch



© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-03-09 11:35 PM


oooooooooooooh!  This is terrific!  Loved it!  
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2 posted 2004-03-10 03:43 AM


awesome format! great theme! very creative!
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3 posted 2004-03-10 06:27 AM


oh you know this is good!!
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4 posted 2004-03-11 01:14 PM


Excellent! Very well-written!
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5 posted 2004-03-11 01:17 PM


Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

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6 posted 2004-03-11 01:34 PM


Very well written steaven! Love this! Chris  

For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.
-- Judy Garland





    

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7 posted 2004-03-11 01:39 PM


...reaches down and lifts one up...

Warm hugs,
EA

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8 posted 2004-03-11 02:07 PM


Very creative write, love it!

Charisma

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9 posted 2004-03-11 02:17 PM


I liked the visual steps the lines were takaing you down as you read. NICE!!
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