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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Anonymous stuck in this rut but I have wishes and dreams inside me that are blocked by the feeling that I belong nowhere a feeling that is deeper than an emptiness stronger than an ache one that wails inside looking for release this is not the day it stays held in tensing every muscle pounding every nerve as cold as the flakes that are coming down to drift into their own place of landing belonging nowhere to no one not even the shadows embrace me today as I settle once more between the lines of life anonymous in pain "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a chillingly beautiful write understanding this feeling but it's nice to know you can hang out in here any day of the year, and feel welcome |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this day is all there is GO OUT THERE AND GET IT Maureen!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you possess a treasured gift...many...allow them to embrace you...your a lovely woman, with a very unique mind and heart. Tremendous write. |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
This haunting and full of sorrow and power! Been there! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write M, but you don't belong nowhere to noone, you belong here to us bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks Bernie...sometimes that is all there is  M |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
To us you are not anonymous...we know that you are there..... and we will offer love and support whenever you need it Maureen...sad poem...but you show us where you are at a particluar time in space..thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
"not even the shadows embrace me today"...so sad and lonely. wonderfully written nevertheless. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know how you feel. I feel the same way, alot of times, too. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Nice one. I like the line about the snowflakes. You penned this one well!! If you're not yourself, then there is no you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
not even the shadows embrace me today heres hoping that the sun will always embrace you M. soft hugs... It's better than I could have planned.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, this one really touched my heart. I could feel the pain in it. Hugs to you, sweet lady  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
M, I was filled with the urge to "fly" over and pay you a little visit. I could make up an inviting pot of hot, mulled cider that we could share ~ along with some friendly chit chat! You truly are special, you know.  Loving hugs, EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Fly over any time Linda  Thank you everyone for your caring words. Sometimes I do feel anonymous in this world...maybe of my own making, maybe a little of bad luck... as I post here waiting for it to turn around. Thanks again M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-11-2004 05:25 PM).] |
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