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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Dwell upon me O gracious rain that I might be cleansed, that my soul might again grow from the ashes. Bath me O gracious light, that I might be comforted by thy warmth on this a day of chill. For, fog has lain upon this heart and dew has glistened eyes.And a walk once steady, now stooped struggles to rise, to walk...again. Lift me in thine arms, stand before me and whisper softly the name of they who scoff, that I might forgive those whose trespasses fall upon me as muddied prints. Lastly... Sing a song of angels, for my aches are many and to just once soar, soar ever high the clouds, that I might again feel whole....once more. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry "Lastly... Sing a song of angels, for my aches are many and to just once soar, soar ever high the clouds, that I might again feel whole....once more." I am not an angel, but I know a few...I will ask them to help me sing for you.  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Dwell upon me O gracious rain that I might be cleansed, that my soul might again grow from the ashes''' I find myself asking for the same, very touching Barry~ ~~**~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Lastly... Sing a song of angels, for my aches are many and to just once soar, soar ever high the clouds, that I might again feel whole....once more." Very profound write dear poet sir. ~Soft smiles & tender hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There are angels in the world Mag... and it takes one to know one. Glad to see your words grace this place. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Magnus -- A dynamic write for sure and very meaningful for me, as well. May the March rains wash you lily fresh and grow you tall. .....iliana |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, "I Feel"... You know how I regard your writing! I'm such a fan of your talent. It appears an unfortunate fact of life that the greater the poet, the more the poet has had to experience, endure, and overcome... Remember, "and this too shall pass". I say those words repeatedly ~ like a mantra ~ when I am going through difficult times. It does help. Love & Light, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a lovely prayer |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh*...A prayer that cries out from the soul....Hope all is well...**hugs** |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~*Lastly... Sing a song of angels, for my aches are many and to just once soar, soar ever high the clouds, that I might again feel whole....once more*~ Beautiful penned!  Charisma |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Barry, this is a wonderful prayer poem. I FEEL IT. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus I can only hope you get your wish, enjoyed. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Intensely written. And profoundly felt as I read this Barry. believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Barry you amaze me, a resiliant write...read and images which flow right into the readers mind...taking us away for moments at a time...your a thoughtful man. Thank you for sharing. |
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