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So close... |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania 
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So close Years of travel,searching for truth the door so far away answers come and go like a dream the door grows truth comes in many forms, so sad, none found real the door grows closer once sought with fresh heart and mind now desperate to have done ,once,for all the door , so close Life shows you what you seek the door bars you from the prize its there! So close! Truth waits, tantilizing and warm The door holds strong, against fists and fury To the floor ,,,you slide,,,,, strength gone,,,at the mercy of yourself .....click..... you give yourself the key,,,, This door grows small the horizon,,,,,so far away,,, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hold onto that key |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh I sure understand this...and it's so close to my heart right now... well done! |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Very descriptive piece, I felt I was there with you, trying so hard to open that door. Sad, but beautiful. Thank you for sharing. W.W. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Midnitesun,,,,,,,I definatly will Passing shadows,,Thank you, I think many of us have beaten our head against a door, or two, in life,,, WinterWren,,,,,,,Thank You, glad you felt where I was going. So much change going on in my life right now, all good......closing old doors to the past, as fresh ones wait ahead,,,,,, I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Michelle, Michelle, Michelle... You are just gonna have to stop writing this well, or I am going to get a complex. I liked it when you showed it to me before you posted it, and I like is a little more seeing it on here a few days later. My ex-wife says I never listened to her. At least I think that's what |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Michelle! Very much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Ringo.....thank you dear, as always, your opinion means the most, and is held the highest enchantress..thank you for such kind words....my ego thanks you too,  Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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