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As We Part |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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"I love you, my Baby", we often say to each other Mostly on the phone, though in person we had much rather It is hard to be apart when together is so much better With our hearts so entwined we are destined to be together In our lives there seems to be such complications But on all of these we will serve notification To each other, no way will we lose our dedication With each other we will be for our lives duration As we have to leave each other and tears fill our eyes More and more it is simple for us to fully realize That this awful pain we feel will not completely subside Until in the same home together we will with each other reside ONE DAY, MY LOVE, ONE DAY |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel, your longing ~ and love ~ cries right off the page and into my heart. May the day that you two lovebirds build a nest together come very soon... Loving hugs, Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, sweet lady.  Thank you for your understanding. I hope that you are feeling well and getting your strength back. With love and hugs,  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl One day I'm sure, loved the write. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ethel, may this dream manifest quickly as it is clear through your beautiful longing words, that you are destined to each other. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, thank you for your encouragement.  . . Thank you, Margherita, for being there. . . I appreciate both of you very much. Heart hugs to you both, Ethel |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
For sure, one day soon, Ethel. You and Gary will be together. believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Scorpio. I really do appreciate that. Hugs Ethel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ethel soon one day will turn into reality every day. I wish for you that it comes soon. Hugs. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, sweet Donna. I do too.... Hugs Ethel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hang in there Ethel... So much love can only lead to gentle resolutions. Enjoyed, TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
keep the faith, as i know you will  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Two hearts so lovingly longing, I hope your wishes and dreams come true for both of you Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's nice to read of such strong love |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww Ethel, I wish there was something I could do or say to make you feel better. You and Gary deserve each and every happiness the world has to offer. hugs, Chris |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, Michelle, Hope, Dixie, Chris..... Ya'll are all so sweet. Gary and I both appreciate each one of you so very much. Thank you all. With love and heart hugs to each of you, Ethel |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
One day for sure.......hope that day will come soon. Charisma |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is sweet Ethel and yes keep the faith. M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ethel...soon you and Gary will be together for all eternity. You just have to believe! Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I read this and realize you two are already together...living apart maybe...but together with divine love.....heart hugssss good to see you posting again! ~~**~~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a very well done yearning aching poem - it drips with the emotion you feel - Paul |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Ethel, I loved this piece soooo much... It reminds me a lot my relationship with the man I love. ~Kelly~ |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You pour your heart out... God bless you! Grover. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh the ache of love..i feel it here! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Charisma, Maree, Nancy Lee, Lauren, Paul, Vandana, Kelly, Grover, Dawn....... WOW!! What an outpouring of love and understanding from all of my family of friends. All of you are so wonderful. I appreciate each of you from the depths of my heart. Thank you all so very much!! Heart hugs and love to each of you, Ethel |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"In our lives there seems to be such complications But on all of these we will serve notification To each other, no way will we lose our dedication With each other we will be for our lives duration" ~ This stanza stood out to me. I could really see the meaning. enjoyed! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Opeth. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it, and understood what I was saying. Hugs Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Ethel, I understand just how you feel, dearest friend, I have never even gotten to hold a girl's hand yet and now I'm hoping moving to Portland there I can find a special girl and become best of friends with her and get to feel the beauty of friendship's love, but until then the ache is difficult to endure! (sigh) I know with all my heart Gary will finally fill the nest in your heart without ever having to leave again real soon, in fact he already lives there and you're destined for each other, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Ethel, I read this earlier, but couldn't post then. I'm glad this came around again. The second time through, it was just as meaningful and touching as the first. The longing...the patience... Take care. You are a gem to us. Sadie |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, you are so understanding. Thank you for that and for reading. . . Sadie, thank you so much for reading again, and for saying such nice things. I really do appreciate it. . . Heart hugs to you both, Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ethel -- such a heartfelt, beautiful poem. By the way, your new website is really beautiful! .........jo |
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