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Song of Evermore
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Song of Evermore |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Song of Evermore empty of ourselves we now stand hearts nipped as with frostbite though it seems like only yesterday we took our first heated breath of love. yes, we loved like lovers should clinging to each other, it was so good certain the end would not come no it never could-- full of ourselves we once stood. ©2004 Grover Gall |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned Grover..and very true. Hugs~
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Grover...Powerfully expressed! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Amazing how that happens huh? I really liked this one Grover. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"No it never could!" Oh, you have put this together so well, that now I feel so melancholic ... Love, Margherita |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i feel the sadness in this too, but, it is sometimes true to life.... very nice Grover  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Grover, sometimes it just isn't meant to work out and I believe that happens so He can help us to become stronger and understand the gist of loves true potential, but He has a plan for all and you will find this evermore beauty, yay! (smiles) God less You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Grover, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
empty of ourselves we now stand hearts nipped as with frostbite On a night when I can't get warm, your words go straight to this heart. *S* Excellent! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Grover...this poem may be short but shows your love well... Thank you.. Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad... but the end always comes in one way or another... nothing lasts forever |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Grover, this poem of yours, and mine of today are almost like a conversation! I like yours....it's dreamy and right on the edge of the inevitable reality! ~K~ |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
 This is a song I know well!Loved the read |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"clinging to each other, it was so good certain the end would not come" You are right; it should feel this way. Well done! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly lyrical! Eric |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Grover, Excellently written! Ah, however, I don't think anything ever ends-loves just change, sometimes masquerades. Granted, it might be easier to feel with the first breath and clinging arms! Thanks, Grover-you got me thinking again. Sadelite |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This speaks kindly to the heart of lost lovers. A poetic beauty in its entirety~ Lovely work, Grover~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sad but true, isn't it. Sandra |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful writing, Grover. So truye, sometimes, too. Hugs  Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Grover -- enjoyed very much! |
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