Open Poetry #31 |
Scattering Salt |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
From My Journals of Endless Winter ~~ Show me your shadows and all you hold beyond touch this night sky fills midnights void in colored hues of you I, in stolen sleep linger, lost at your lips silhouettes of memories haunt my fingertips touch hour after after I think of you how your tender words still weep inside even now, I adore silence We, pressed in kaleidoscope connection while the universe drifts between us endlessly outward moonlight spilling on stones, --it is then I watch your eyes sleep as midnight arrives I scatter salt whispering your name to the sea until the waves fade you away again, I am left sliding along pure darkness awaiting to taste Spring upon your lips ~~ Greatly Inspired and Muse Dedicated |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I scatter salt whispering your name to the sea until the waves fade you away again, I am left sliding along pure darkness awaiting to taste Spring upon your lips Beautiful Lauren! hugs, Chris I have spread my dreams under your feet; Tread softly because you tread on my dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Lauren, this is just so very lovely. Not surprisingly, I chose the same lines as my sister as being my favourites. Beautiful..simply beautiful. ~Love ya lady~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lauren, you've blown me away ~ yet again! ~ with your poetic talent! Love & Light, Linda |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Show me your shadows and all you hold beyond touch this night sky fills midnights void in colored hues of you I, in stolen sleep linger, lost at your lips silhouettes of memories haunt my fingertips touch hour after after I think of you how your tender words still weep inside ----------------------------- We, pressed in kaleidoscope connection while the universe drifts between us endlessly outward moonlight spilling on stones, ---------------------- I scatter salt whispering your name to the sea until the waves fade you away again, I am left sliding along pure darkness ============================= you were expecting me, right? I read you and hear the sky sigh with me ... I would swear on my love of poetry that when you type these, computer keys make the sound of a piano resonating... your poetry is a symphony of heart sounds. Through the water ... through the rain ... to the soul of everything |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Awesome write. Yes, deeply inspired. Love, Margherita |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Let's see... while reading this I could picture a sailor returning to sea, with his loved one passionately and patiently waiting for his return... nature... stillness...landscapes with oceans in the background... April ethereal! Enjoyed! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned!!! Charisma |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Wow! ~K~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I have only 3 owrds.... Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful Your writes are so gently and lovingly expressed! Thank you for writing and sharing this music. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
again... you know I enjoy your words..and the way you put them into pieces such as this is nothing short of artistry.. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow...this makes me realize all that is not in my life...sigh...incredible write |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We, pressed in kaleidoscope connection while the universe drifts between us endlessly outward You continue to make hearts melt with such ease and tenderness. Always so good, sweet lady~ Hugs Lauren~ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Lauren you have a very beautiful dreamlike quality to your poems..you present frames..like flashbacks to us the reader and we see your unique world... Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lauren, your poetry is so beautiful..... it's peaceful feeling. I still wish that I could read some of your journals and notebooks. Are you ever going to publish them? I wish you would. Hugs, my friend Ethel |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
This can only bring a smile to my face! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Big smile for this one! |
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