Open Poetry #31 |
Elder Voices (wisdoms calling) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Breeze through trees blow softly by, the old familiar feel revisiting. Heart rests, moment of refuge. Enraptured warmth, mesmerizing lullaby transcending self past empty, alone spaces. I CRY inside. Ancient whispers had refrained from ears hear sounds evident but I... I no longer listened; intent on drowning by surrounding sounds of commotion.... Stumbling through darkness distant howls, this stillness of night. Rising mists, echoes seek. Humbly I thank the Great Spirit for elder voices carried on wind, lifting spirit above; wisdoms callings heard once again.... {We can make it through the storms and the winds of change Though I walk through the valley of darkness I am not afraid Cause I know I'm not alone On this lonely road of faith. Kid Rock} |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
and to hear the calling, to follow their echo, will lead you home... this is such a nice ~sound~ to read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit, Enjoyed the walk through your thoughts. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is so important to know that gravity exists; otherwise, we would loose connections withrootedthoughts... So it is time to listen to the winds again... for even rooted trees find time to dance. yes, I know... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ In the power of listen we find the ancient voices in surround~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks everyone. sometimes we all need a little leading home.... I dunno, it just feels like there is more to say but the arrival of those words seem to be stuck in transit somewhere. Go figure. It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This poem was like your name gentle...very nice read...thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Humbly I thank (your Gentle) Spirit" for your voice carries on wind... Donna, your "wisdoms callings" are "heard once again" by this fan of your spirit writings. Love & Spirit Light, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! I love this! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Humbly I thank the Great Spirit for elder voices carried on wind, lifting spirit above; wisdoms callings heard once again.... And, I hear the whispers of wisdom from your heart, sweet Donna..... Hugs, Ethel |
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