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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-03-04 11:24 PM

A shift in the restriction
Something too tight grips too deep
Disquieted and restless
Into nocturnal wander
The ranges broader…fleeting
Hallowed ground and garnet sky

Inside turns out, wild and ancient
Retracing silent steps…before
The grasses wet with tears of night
Cool and calmer than the prints imparted
Sounds of kin and spirits echo here
Inside…a savage place of fortitude and plenty

Seeing in the yellow haze
Stepping into wanton graze
To the summit of a fate and destiny
Caged too long in too little
Upon the granite bed be said
I am free

Copyright Kkh 3/4/04

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (03-05-2004 07:57 AM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-03-04 11:42 PM

loved the imagery TD

"Seeing in the yellow haze
Stepping into wanton graze
To the summit of a fate and destiny
Caged too long in too little
Upon the granite bed be said
I am free"

I saw and felt this, colored in Vincent's yellow.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2004-03-05 12:53 PM

this is such a well-written poem...your word choices are exquisite...I especially loved this line:

"The grasses wet with tears of night"

that one jumped out at me...very nicely done

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2004-03-08 01:22 AM

Inside…a savage place of fortitude and plenty

So good, Kathleen

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2004-03-09 02:46 AM

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-03-09 12:44 PM

Seeing in the yellow haze
Stepping into wanton graze
To the summit of a fate and destiny
Caged too long in too little
Upon the granite bed be said
I am free

i do so understand this haze of transition
to destiny that comes at times
as usual yur images are impeccable

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-03-09 12:46 PM

you amaze me

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-03-09 01:19 PM

"The grasses wet with tears of night"

~ how perfectly poetic!

Love & Light,
EA

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