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Open Poetry #31

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RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2004-03-09 06:36 AM

The swaying moon enchants night to come,
Her light been skies ocean waves,
Falling upon the earth,
Stars be memories of wonderous soul’s,
Drawing mortals gaze towards this beautiful place,
Surrounded with endless clouds,
Atop those clouds are those heavens ground,
My footsteps shall tread upon those clouds,
And the feeling I felt as I stared upon this place,
Shall flow through my veins forever more,
And dreams ive dreamt will be painted within the skies,
Releasing all I were becoming a new born again,
On heavens ground my life shall start over,
And tears that fell will return to me.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-03-09 07:02 AM

Again you created a wondrous atmosphere, dear Lee.

Atop those clouds are those heavens ground,
My footsteps shall tread upon those clouds,

Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-03-09 12:07 PM

Lee, this appealed to me on so many levels. It was magical, lyrical and absolutely fascinating!

I enjoyed reading you again!

Warm hugs and smiles,
Linda

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-03-09 12:54 PM

I like that ending

nice work

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