Twilight Tanka (alliteration alert)

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Open Poetry #31

Twilight Tanka (alliteration alert)

Midnitesun

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Gaia

0 posted 2004-03-09 12:16 PM

Birch bark burns brightly.

Midnite's magic moonlit muse

dances daringly,

flinging fleeting fantasies,

scattering starlit spirit.

*

ethome
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1 posted 2004-03-09 12:19 PM

Very clever alliteration filled piece....Nice mood

Eric

Duncan
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2 posted 2004-03-09 12:20 PM

Was just getting off of here and saw your alliteration alert. There should be a law against those things...

I'll alert JM.

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2004-03-09 12:25 PM

Thank you Dunc. (It appears we now have alliteration police.)

and my, Kace--you did a great job with this.

That moon rendered me wordless tonight.

Midnitesun

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4 posted 2004-03-09 12:31 PM

Eric, thank you! glad you enjoyed this.

Dunc, LOL, yep, our JM loves alliteration.
Glad you didn't leave until you had this wakeup call.

Karen, THANKS! LOL, alliteration police? that's funny.

iliana
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5 posted 2004-03-09 01:34 AM

Kacy -- I surely, surely liked this one, young lady!

.......jo

Midnitesun

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6 posted 2004-03-09 02:13 AM

Iliana, thanks for that reply.
LOL, especially the 'young' lady part.

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2004-03-09 07:46 AM

Birch bark burns brightly
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Now Im moth giddy... trees to hug and alliterations.

groovy write of word play and imagery poetess Kacy.

Dunc? dont forget there is porch puppy police too.

Through the water ... through the rain ... to the soul of everything
Wash my heart out on the stones ... and I'm almost gone.

David Gray

Midnitesun

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Gaia

8 posted 2004-03-09 12:29 PM

good morning, dear alliteration lover
LOL, I hoped the moth would fly in for a closer view

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

9 posted 2004-03-09 05:39 PM

Very very lovely!

I feel showered by "starlit spirit" ...

Love, Margherita

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

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10 posted 2004-03-09 09:57 PM

simply sensational...and loverly, too

INclan
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11 posted 2004-03-10 11:30 AM

WELL DONE! I really enjoyed this. Thank you for posting it.

INclan

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