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Still Branches [haiku]
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Still Branches [haiku] |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Still branches, [This message has been edited by choshi (01-27-2004 11:15 AM).] |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
look at you, you just get prettier everyday! dreamily waiting for evening respite chill of night ~Dawn  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
bare of leave full of winter's white snowfall twilight gleams |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
look at you, you just get prettier everyday! dreamily waiting for evening respite chill of night ~Dawn Dawn, you have me speechless....for the mooment....~P [Blushing] |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful!!!! Sunshine..... bare of leave |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Still branches, bare in the setting sun's blaze: snowladen. upon our eyes they feign nudity, in 3 moons the leaves return, rendering us mystified |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love reading you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ Breathtakingly inspiring~ Naked branches offering A soft place to fall~ *Huglets* AND thanks~  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
dreamily waiting for evening respite chill of night ~Dawn Dreaming or awake enveloped by the long night: sweet respite. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
upon our eyes they feign nudity, in 3 moons the leaves return, rendering us mystified marking passing time, with moons that wax and wane anticipating blossoms- they rise and fade all to soon as do the seasons of this life. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I love reading you Thank you Dixie, Ditto....~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Paul~ Breathtakingly inspiring~ *Huglets* AND thanks~ ~*Marge*~ Thank you Marge. SO glad you feel inspired...
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You created the vision perfectly in my mind ~ and stilled it... Thank you!  Warm hugs, EA |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
You created the vision perfectly in my mind ~ and stilled it... Thank you! Warm hugs, EA Aww, Thank you EA, Glad you felt the stillness.... back....~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
back at you Dixie,,,,  ~P |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a wonderful still you photographed with your pen! Very vivid! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
What a wonderful still you photographed with your pen! Very vivid! Thank you Jo.... back ~P |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Nicely done. A moment in time.... INclan |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
A moment in time.... INclan Thank you ~P |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
still they offer life beneath the frozen blankets fingers reach in warmth Loved this, an inspiring write! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
still they offer life beneath the frozen blankets fingers reach in warmth Loved this, an inspiring write! Thank you Kacy, ...and I love where you moved it to... ~P |
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