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Arabesque |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
In the nature of the twisted vine far away from an infernal mine lie defintions of eternal lines figures were depicted in their kind. The spiral of the vine inspired a tendril motif in the land of princes and the occasional thief twisted columns grew in support of the pattern glossed o'er by the light of a well oiled lantern... t'was all relegated to a tenacious vine that climbed in spirals its host divine an art form grew, etched in infinite relief a repeated pattern, with a tendril motif... [This message has been edited by wordwizard (03-10-2004 11:05 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! a wonderfully intricate write enjoyed the leitmotif |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"The spiral of the vine inspired a tendril motif in the land of princes and the occasional thief twisted columns grew in support of the pattern lit buy the light of a well oiled lantern..." Especially liked the above stanza, Wordwizard! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice.  |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
someone should have caught me on the "lit by the light" part which needed editing... |
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