Open Poetry #31 |
Red Suited Sign (Tanka....cause I saw one !!!) |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Might this be a sign? A new season's messenger? Uniform of spring Chirping orders of begin Buds reach up to robin's call ~ . . I saw a robin just this morning!! Yippee! Chris Barker March 2004 ~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have to get up earlier...I miss everything but I'm glad I didn't miss this tanka! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nightshade A delight to read. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Dixie and Seymour. I am so excited. I saw a robin to-day and I needed this injection of spring as I have a beauty of a cold. Hugs! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you for sharing this sign Charisma |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YIPPEE!!!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Buds reach up to a robin's call" ~ I can see it now! Spring's a comin'! Springy hugs, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou lady poets three! Hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good for you Chris! Love this Tanka and the news that you saw a Robin! Spring cannot be far away now! ~Hugs, Love and Miss ya, Teed~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Ah yes Chris...a robin is certainly the first sign of spring!!! Now don't go sneezing on those early birds with your cold!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi Teed! I thought of you right away when I say the robin. You and I used to sing together...."robin in the rain....what a saucy fellow..la la laaa" Member? Luv Ya! scorpio - lol. Thankyou. I will try not to sneeze outside. Oh, my goodness my head is one big fishbowl !! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ohhh gads I hope so.....please send spring in my direction.... hugsss you and colorful write! ~~**~~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
must be spring soon!! lovely write Chris - Paul |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lauren, Paul & vandana - many thanks! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... couldn't resist. This is so sweet and promising. Love, Margherita |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
nice |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Margherita - awww thankyou for the pic & comments. muted - thankyou for reading and replying. For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Chris A big ( ) on this one....very nice enjoyed ________ice ><> |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
It's spring!! ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thanks ice & sky !! hugs. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Chris -- brilliant tanka! Really enjoyed it. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou iliana !! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I would accept this as a sign...yup yup yup. Well done. Thank you for posting. INclan |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Harmony, joy and enthusiasm... Welcome Spring. Wonderful song in your words Chris. TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmm and we just had some more snow falling lightly this morning.. still anticipating M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou all. I worry about the robins as there still could be snow in the coming days. But, they are a hearty bird and I pray they will be alright. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
A beauty Chris....I long for this sight, this winter has exerted such a strong hold... Paul |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and they're so thin! My garden and yard is teaming with fat worms, just beginning to wiggle upward. Let the robins fly in! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Paul & Karilea, thankyou both. The robins are thin this year? Maybe we should throw them pasta instead of bread. Hugs |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwwww, I lovvvveeee robins, they're soooooo cute and always mnake me happy seeing them to see spring here, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, now time to twitter my happy robin chant, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
What a neat Tanka! I'd like to see something besides crows. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou so much Noah & Pilgrimage!! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I really need to pay more attention Chris. I sure hope if there are any in my area, they aren't frightened away by our impending snowstorm at the end of this week. Great write ... hugs, Marti |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Me too Marti. We are expecting some slight snowfall and I know that robins can only take a few days of that kind of weather. Hopefully they have found warm enough coverage. Thanks for reading and commenting. Hugs! |
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