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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2004-03-08 12:50 PM

Misleading endeavors
shifts in reverse
with all good intentions
strategically placed
between full stops
and line breaks
side swiped
slamming head on
ripping into my smile
disheartened by the divider
I should have known better.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2004-03-08 02:01 AM

Ah! No shoulds! Remember the good intentions... ~K~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2004-03-08 02:12 AM

What a nice reply, you can be sure I will never forget.
Thank you so much for reading me tonight ~K~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-03-08 02:36 AM

ouchie!

girl, I know this well

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-03-08 05:37 AM

I should have known better.

sometimes hard lessons to learn...or maybe we are blindsided.

husss
M

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-03-08 06:49 AM

i should have, i could have, i would have
next time, you , like I, will know better...
yea, right........lol who am i kidding

id like to think we will, but .........
love your style, girlie

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2004-03-08 01:32 PM

The cad!!! Let's deep-fry him. Or would you prefer barbecue???

Hiya Bluesy...

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2004-03-08 02:10 PM

I prefer you without bruises, so I agree with Kahlil. Shoulda, woulda, coulda, if only Ida hada...will only leave you as disoriented as Richard III on Bosworth Field looking for a horseshoe nail.

I hope you soon can turn your great and obvious poetic skills to happier thoughts.

*smile*

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

8 posted 2004-03-08 02:45 PM

ah if one hasn't said that "shoulda known better" then one hasn't lived and learned...great metaphor

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2004-03-08 02:50 PM

What icebox said...
well done Bluesy!
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

10 posted 2004-03-08 03:48 PM

Hey Blues, a real traffic problem with the "I Should Have(s)," eh? One fantastic writer you are! Grover.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2004-03-08 03:54 PM

you are a beautiful person, anyone would be crazy not to want to be around you....

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2004-03-08 04:37 PM

Everyone before me has summed this up well...what a glorious writer you are my dear.
TD

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