Open Poetry #31 |
Congenial Forevers |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Congenial Forevers Look at me, as I look At you, In a most congenial way Is this Who you are? (Do not ask the age of innocence) Change? Is simply concurrent with Life’s give and takes… If one cannot give, And take, With the flow Then let it go. Nothing stagnant, Changes Other than to die. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a theme close to my heart right now...thank you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very true Karilea. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Yes...so well put. Oh, I really liked this. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Nodding in agreement here. Hugs~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Change? Is simply concurrent with Life’s give and takes… If one cannot give, And take, With the flow Then let it go." Lovely penning of great words of wisdom, Sunshine! .......jo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Nothing stagnant, Changes Other than to die." Great depth! Thank you for sharing it. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea So thoughtfilled and well done. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Incredible wisdom is wrapped in your words... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"If one cannot give, And take, With the flow Then let it go." Everytime I read this, I hear Johnnie Cochran's voice... Good advice, poetically spoken Kari. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Well worded piece. My favorite lines are the same as Duncan's. Excellent. Thank you for sharing. W.W. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Splendiferous !! yea its sunshine |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I agree too. Very wise advice Karilea. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Great! Grover. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
yes indeed....a wise word spoken... ~~**~~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wondermous Karilea and so very true. M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
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enjoyed the sounds and wisdom of this. You have such versality as a poetess. Sadie |
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