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Open Poetry #31

Keep Smiling,Baby

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-03-07 12:05 PM

keep smiling,baby
keep smiling
things are darkest
before the sun comes out
thats what you'd always say to me
say it to me again
with passion
with love
with life
i love the way your hair falls into your eyes,
like that
like that
say it to me one more time
so i can watch your mouth move
so i can look into your ~~eyes~~ heart
i'll smile
just for you
say it to me again
but this time..
maybe i'll believe it..

"i wonder if you realize,i've been waiting till i see it in your eyes.."

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-03-07 12:07 PM

a good song in there, Chelsea
sometimes, life sucks

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-03-07 04:33 AM

like this

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-03-07 08:00 AM

very good

Dave

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2004-03-09 10:53 PM

Oh yes, I really enjoyed reading this.

Well done, exhale~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-03-09 11:31 PM

I remember these feelings. Nice write, exhale.

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