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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-03-06 04:52 PM

Yet To Be Written

I am neither
a mind reader
nor do I have
any magic
to offer you
I push forward
when I feel
weakness in
others but pull
and withdraw
when I feel
my own
wasting too much
time on my fears
and maybe this
time I care
too much that
it will risk me
too close to
the edge
in the novel
you say I want
there is no novel
there shall be
one day
but it is
yet to be written
but when I
look straight into
your eyes
I see the future
in clear words

"i wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-03-06 04:56 PM

"there is no novel
there shall be
one day
but it is
yet to be written
but when I
look straight into
your eyes
I see the future
in clear words"

Love it Helen!!
Excellent...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2004-03-06 04:57 PM

"so i plucked a rural pen
and stained the water clear..."

enjoyed this poem very much

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-03-06 06:37 PM

Very, very good! Grover.

sea_of_okc
Senior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

4 posted 2004-03-06 08:06 PM

Excellent poem.
Hope the novel has a very happy ending...

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

5 posted 2004-03-07 08:24 AM

Oh my, Helen...

This is exquisite! Thank you so much!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-03-07 02:34 PM

always touch my heart...sigh

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-03-07 04:42 PM

OneSlick~

'and maybe this
time I care
too much that
it will risk me
too close to
the edge'

Oh yes ... know that edge just too, too well~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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