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pammy
Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 50
California

0 posted 2004-03-04 08:29 PM

Its amazing how fast your life can change,
A split second and nothing is the same.
It wasn't my fault and it wasnt hers,
So why did she have to die?

She was my best friend,
and now she is dead.
One stupid mistake not made by her,
and now everything in my life is a total blurr.

She knew what not to do,
She promised she'd be good.
She didnt drink a single drop,
Sober and clean she stood.

So why then you ask,
is she the one dead.
The answer is this,
HE couldnt get this through his it.

He did the wrong things and wasnt smart like she was,
He chose to get into his car,
he thought to himself"its only a buzz"

Now her beautiful eyes are closed forever,
Her graceful legs are still.
She'll never get up to dance again,
or cheer up her many friends.

Her life is through,
and it wasnt her fault.
He chose to drink, and then to drive,
He Chose to take away my friend,
And ruin my life in the end.

~*Pammy*~
“The brave may not live for long,
but the sheltered never live at all”

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

1 posted 2004-03-04 08:48 PM

wow, powerful and sad...im so sorry....this is painfully beautiful

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2004-03-04 10:01 PM

What does one say about such a tragedy...my heart goes out to you...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-03-04 10:03 PM

How sad..and unfortunately a story that happens too often.
Well done.
Hugs~

~ Those who complain the sun
has gone out of their world
...have obviously never danced in the rain ~

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

4 posted 2004-03-07 01:49 PM

Hey this is a very tragic poem. I'm kinda concerned. Give me a ring when you get this reply. A sad story that happens all too often. If only people would take a split second to think before they react...

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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