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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-03-06 07:16 AM


My Thoughts

My thoughts are often thrown like dice
And land within a soup like spice
Creating times of wonderment
Of times that were and now are spent

Picking up the threads of lace
Roses and there place of grace
Of heartbeats that were my all
Summer winter and the fall

Music that I danced in awe
Gliding o’er the ballroom floor
Full of odors on a glove
Full of presence of my love

These my moments lived in joy
Forever in my redeploys
Spirits of a bygone age
Phantom still that walk my stage

It is the genie of my wand
It is the music I respond

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2004-03-06 07:29 AM


Fine writing....good style..and rymed well as usual..

Thank you..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-03-06 07:37 AM


Now, Sy, this is tickling fancy
this morning, and a good thing...
the sun will soon be out
and bid the moon adieu...

and I'll bet, I'll just bet...
you'll be thinking of working
in the garden...or watching someone
who does!

  

scorpio
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3 posted 2004-03-06 08:58 AM


Wonderfully written, Sy.  Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us today.

believe in what your heart feels...

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4 posted 2004-03-06 09:01 AM


Beautiful morning write...
Very much enjoyed Sy!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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5 posted 2004-03-06 09:35 AM


Picking up the threads of lace
Roses and there place of grace
Of heartbeats that were my all
Summer winter and the fall

Beautiful Sey!!!
Blueberry Muffins with tea?
hugs, Chris

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-03-06 10:15 AM


Goldenrose
Thank you for the read and reply.

Sunshine
You are shinning today.

scorpio
Thank you my friend.

Nancy,
Tea for two?

Chris,
And a litle bliss from Chris.

Sadelite
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7 posted 2004-03-06 10:20 AM


Sy,
   I am so glad to find your poem at the top.  Earlier I was looking for one because I miss responding. I hadn't done a search yet, but had plans to. Things have been so busy here, I hardly find time to write, let alone respond to all the poets who read mine and those poets who I love to read.  You don't know how your poetry is treasured.
               Sadie  

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-03-06 10:43 AM


Sadie,
You are a sweetheart, thank you.

Martie
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9 posted 2004-03-06 10:57 AM



"My thoughts are often thrown like dice
And land within a soup like spice
Creating times of wonderment
Of times that were and now are spent"

Sy-thought-soup....yum!!  

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2004-03-06 01:42 PM


Martie
Yummy, yummy tummy.

Suetang
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11 posted 2004-03-06 03:53 PM


Hi Seymour

I really loved this fine piece of writing, your words took me on a wonderful journey.

For you :


Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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