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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Dust from ground the wind will blow With spirit bring from long ago The trees will whisper of where to find The love to seek from far behind Ancient voices in creeks soft murmur Drift in notes til slowly firmer Ancient oaks were only a seed When words were spoken in pact agreed There is forever of what they spoke Though earthly lives are like wisp of smoke Whether thou first or linger last Wait for me as time does past As the sun does rise and moon does set The oceans will whisper, “I’ll never forget” Forever you will be a part of me Of what once was, will surely be Though dust to flesh, to dust again The day will come in sweet begin |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhDearKeeper~ I just knew the winds were blowing thoughts of you about ... and was hoping you'd end up here~ Lovely ... lovely thoughts, my friend~ There are many here that need the gathering at the fire ....  I'm so glad you've come~ *Huglets*  ~*LittleGoose*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Logan, This is a beautiful poem. ~Laura~ |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
wonderful..... joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...for in the begin lies ever was an unconditional part of life, where man took it upon him to have a dream and matched it to his loving wife so if you should chance to hear the wind singing a song of long ago turn around and into it bend and hear the voices that will forever know. ~*~ You do inspire, you do... Welcome home, Logan |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
once again, I feel the waves of healing upon these blues shores |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Logan Nice write, enjoyed. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, thank you, Little Goose, so good to see you and I appreciate your kind words..very gentle smile Laura, thank you, glad that you enjoyed..very gentle smile MTW, thank you for the read and I am glad it was pleasing to you..very gentle smile Ahh, Sissie, it is you that inspire us more than any. Thank you for the follow up..very gentle smile Kac, micunksi..thank you for hearing..very gentle smile Sy, your words are always appreciated..thank you...gentle smile |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey m'Lo!  You always seem to show up when things look pretty hopeless--like a spiritual "lone ranger" or something... It's so good to read you again my gentle friend.  Always, always you have so much hope that you share most generously. thank you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan You are beauty-hearted! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"As the sun does rise and moon does set The oceans will whisper, “I’ll never forget” Forever you will be a part of me Of what once was, will surely be Though dust to flesh, to dust again The day will come in sweet begin" So good to read you once again dear Logan. And this is yet another keeper for my library. ~Soft smiles & hugs, Leighgirl~
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
very nice. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hello dear friend, how are you? I've only popped in recently to post, came back today and here you are! A lovely, soft whisper of a poem. I like your rhyme scheme, too. Peace, Cor |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh*A love so timeless that it is forever and eternally true....Stunningly Beautiful... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
How wonderful to read your awesome words once again Logan. Enjoyed! Chris "At one glance |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautifully written. Deb |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nicely written...especially love the turn of the phrase: "Ancient voices in creeks soft murmur Drift in notes til slowly firmer" |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
breathtaking |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Logan I so enjoy reading your fine words, always. I hope all is well in your life. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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