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A Walk |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Walk Sometimes I walk among the clouds Where the mist locks me in shroud Sweeping through my mind in tails Like the dance of the seven veils I ride the currents in a surge Hear the echoes of a dirge Sense the feelings of a spell Let my mind into its dwell And I am dressed in hews of gold That moulds my senses in its hold Sweeping me in wiles of seem Very much just like a dream And here the veils will peel away Like the stages of a play And visit me the rue of do That feels to me just like a coup And I am king of all I rein All of pleasure, none of pain |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well written and the ryme was spot on...a fine poem Seymour..thanks.. Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
I loved the rhythm especially in this one, but the end was beautifully written. It was such a well rounded poem, I really enjoyed it. ^*Kimberley*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Would it be thou walks such ALWAYS "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very very nicely done as usual my friend.....Smooth delibvery.... Eric |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful morning write Sy!! Much enjoyed!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And here the veils will peel away Like the stages of a play And visit me the rue of do That feels to me just like a coup And I am king of all I rein All of pleasure, none of pain ~*~ Dear friends do say... it's all about fun... Good morning, Sy!!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Sometimes I walk among the clouds Where the mist locks me in shroud Sweeping through my mind in tails Like the dance of the seven veils" May you always have only pleasure and no pain dear Sy! Humm, 'dance of the seven veils' eh?  Methinks I had better brew you a strong cup this morn. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sweeping me in wiles of seem Very much just like a dream wow...a wonderful walk through your mind..*s  M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this walk in optimism very much, my friend... well done! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe I should go for a walk? |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Such a beautiful way to start the day...I love the way this poem flowed so well... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so very right...your the pilot....and flying rather high...in a glide...wonderful write. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked it alot. (smiles) Juju |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I'm a fan of yours Seymour... very good as usual! Grover. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Wow...absolutely loved this one, Sy! Thanks! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Dear Sonneteer Divine ~ and ye be one that is a golden master of his craft! This "Walk" was heavenly!  Angel hugs & kisses, EA |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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