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ethome
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0 posted 2004-03-08 06:21 AM



This is just a just for fun lyric....pop song style.....LOL

The Girl Next Door

They wanted me to look out for you    
Boys round their daughter bothered them      
But you grew older, now I adore you
n they don't know what might begin

I like the fact I live beside you
our gateway to love near discipline
We're into joys of what's happenin
the learning years still rolling in    

Chorus:
Now here we are in an airport line up
A planned escape for the two of us  
By your side wantin nothing more
I'm flyin away with the girl next door
                  
Oh I gotta thank you for growing up  
taking this advenbture on the wind    
We played real hard now we're ready
I'll play the drums to your violin

They say our love is just for music
you in the sixth grade me in seven
The school band bought these tickets to Boston
But I'm prayin we do it next year again.

Chorus:
Now here we are in an airport line up
A planned escape for the two of us  
By your side wantin nothing more
I'm flyin away with the girl next door

© Eric True

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

© Copyright 2004 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2004-03-08 09:04 AM


takes me back a bit, E...

*s

M

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-03-08 09:07 AM


Cute song Eric..love to hear it put to music.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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3 posted 2004-03-08 03:51 PM


sweet little song, but I am sure you too were a heartbreaker...

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

Grover
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4 posted 2004-03-08 03:55 PM


Very good song! Grover.
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5 posted 2004-03-08 09:46 PM


Bravo , your a natural , i am gonna see what i can do with this one maybe add some guitar and violin , truly awesome a keeper for sure



-Wolf

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6 posted 2004-03-08 10:19 PM


this is cute
iliana
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7 posted 2004-03-09 01:56 AM


Eric -- really cute -- would make a great fiddle piece!
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8 posted 2004-03-09 04:40 AM


sweet!
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