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the downfall
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the downfall |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Brocken seriness in the sky gone the swans that never will fly children reflecting will soon cry. "Hopelessness," they whisper too, as they do. "Why me?" They yell to the death mute they once knew. -The only way to live is to give your all.- They wanted to fly, jumping the water fall. Only not to fly, but to stumble and fall. Children blinded with sorrow drift alone. They fear this world as they each turn to stone. They sell thier souls... the only thing they own. Next they start to die and others stand by theyre too in a lie off of somebody's unnatural high. all more sorrow |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice poem, except I couldn't understand the opening words, "Brocken seriness." Enjoyed! Grover. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thats because it goes with the next line. Smiles, glad you liked it. -Juju |
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