imagination brings freedom

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Open Poetry #31

imagination brings freedom

smalls
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since 2002-12-20

Posts 62

0 posted 2004-03-04 03:37 PM

Gray skies in the midst of my eye
Green leaves upon which I rest
An extension of imagination
From this wooden chair
As I sit behind windows of captivity.
The sparrow has caught my attention again
With no intention of looking into the window.
Jumping from limb to limb every way it pleases
Chasing another without worry of being chased.
A freedom dive just for the sake of it.
I should try and dive right into the carpet
And hope that I would fall through
Unto a place where I can free fall
And chase without a worry
With the freedom to live what I imagine.

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2004-03-04 04:45 PM

Yes, I like this one. Usually I don't reply to free style, but yours was nice.

_Juju

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-03-04 04:53 PM

"Jumping from limb to limb every way it pleases
Chasing another without worry of being chased"

enjoyed this imagery very much

smalls
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since 2002-12-20

Posts 62

3 posted 2004-03-04 06:55 PM

thank you... the sparrow smybolizes a person in my life right now... and it drives me nuts hehe

Please check out my poetry online
www.soakgame.net/mrlawrencesmalls

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