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Poetic Torment |
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Timeless New Member
since 2004-03-04
Posts 9 |
. Poetic Torment I sit still, emotionless, empty, with a smile at the break of my mouth... not taking breath, as if air was sin. I feel a torment that’s darker than death, but light it still renders.... cancer is my poetic torment within. I feel no need, to move from shadows of which I’m kept. Lifeless... but immortal in my vicious world I merely am made of stone cold soul, forever and ever alone... I’m hurled, twirled, swirled I am now light bending over a horizon, how have i become this... I'm release from my rock the silence is now not deafening, and shadows become energy... my poetic torment seems to rot I now see light as its meant to be, evergreen, a reality to me... my mind now without doubt I sit still, emotionless, empty with a smile at the break of my mouth... forever my poetic torment is out R.I.P Forever |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
What a wonderful first post. Welcome to Passions, for you will enjoy being here. Look forward to more from you..gentle smile |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Welcome to Passions! This is a powerful debut... I'll look forward to reading more of your work. *S* Please check your email for a special greeting! *S* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Passions. You release the poetic torment quite powerfully. Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I know you will love it here. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Timeless New Member
since 2004-03-04
Posts 9 |
wow thanks for all your kindness, but no-one had sed anything about my other piece, racist triumph!! its on the secound page. thanks. |
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