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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2004-03-04 04:41 AM



Rose petal’s, beautiful fragile,
a temptress of lovers hearts,
like angel feathers,
both freely fall to unknown grounds.

Through the vast tides of feeling’s,
They’d fall upon tender heart,
releasing sweet aromas,
a temptress of love, an temptress.

© Copyright 2004 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-03-04 06:30 AM


Dear Lee, this is sooo beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-22 01:11 PM


Very nice... well-written!
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2004-03-22 01:23 PM



This POEM is as beautiful and fragile as the petals of a rose! It tickled the feathers of this "angel"!

Yours is a tender heart, Dear Lee.

~ May you be surrounded by roses of love,
  EA

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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4 posted 2004-03-22 05:04 PM


Most women would rather pick a scent of choice

I've never worked out why price means value

Most put the prices up on the grounds

That

They can get away it

Not because they deliver

and quite a few women, men and others

do the same

If you prick me do I not bleed

Sorry

mobile call coming in

take a picture and

mail it to me

dave

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