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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-03-19 04:32 PM


Xanadu  (Don't Walk Away)

Tell me what to do?
I think I'm in love with you.
What can I say?
Don't walk away...
Does enough passion live in
your heart to satisfy me?
All I ask of you is forever.
If not, then a day, a week, a month, a year.
Give me whatever you can...
If your heart, your feelings, are not bringing you
to me I will live with these few precious moments.
My heart will yearn but will learn to understand.

JamesLee
March19
2004
Don't say goodbye.
Don't let it die.

© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-03-19 07:03 PM


Love is costly in many ways, but always worth it... you are very good at expressing yourself, James!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-03-19 07:05 PM


Wonderful write James...if it is meant to be..you shouldn't have to ask twice.
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

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3 posted 2004-03-19 07:06 PM


JamesMichael~
Priceless !!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-03-19 07:20 PM


Now, James, I have the song going through my head...

Did you do that on purpose?



Thanks!

iliana
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5 posted 2004-03-19 07:35 PM


James -- hope it all works out -- she must really be special!
DavePage
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6 posted 2004-03-20 07:01 PM


One we all write at times

Maybe 2 or 3 times

Yea

Dave

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-03-22 06:02 PM


Thank you Grover, Enchantress, Marge, Sunshine, iliana and DavePage for the beautiful responses...
Sunshine which song..."Xanadu" or "Don't Walk Away"...which happens to be one of my all time favorite songs...
Iliana she has definately touched my heart...
James

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