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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-03-03 10:11 PM




Love is the poetry of my heart
Surrendering upon paper my souls art
A masterpiece you create in rhyme
Toiling with words that breathe through time

The radiance of your love will light my way
And keep the quill upon its stay
Love grows deep inside my heart and soul
Keeping the hot embers aflame amongst the hot coal

You paint the color of love from your palette
Pressing my heart against my chest like an iron mallet
You've breathed new life when there was none there
And impelled your spell wishing away my earthly cares

My heart is always open and you are welcome inside
For it is the might of the air to which our destiny rides
Take me on a journey far beyond the brightest star
Beyond this surrealism of a utopian cast afar

Your love has left its mark embedded in my heart
Unswayed in the wind before the arrows mark
All sense of time is lost as we two become one
As the chorus unites through a single voice of love's song

Love comes into fruition as I melt into your arms
Falling within the cusp of your enthralling charm
You whisper words of love as our two hearts unite
In silhouette of two before the ever burning candlelight

* * *

"You have bereft me of words,
only my blood speaks to you
through my veins"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-03 10:22 PM


Bravo! standing ovation, you two, for a wonderful blending of souls
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2 posted 2004-03-03 10:31 PM


A masterpiece you create in rhyme

Since you leave me speechless, I'll use your words. *S* This is seamless and superb... you harmonize beautifully! *S*

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3 posted 2004-03-03 10:36 PM


Bravo!!!  Wonderful duet you two!
A beautiful blending which left me breathless!
~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

Suetang
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4 posted 2004-03-03 10:39 PM


Kacy, suthern & Nancy

Thank you so much for your most humbling comments.  It was more than a pleasure to write with someone as talented as Jeff.  I am in awe of his talent and was so honored to be asked to write alongside him.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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5 posted 2004-03-03 10:41 PM


oh my my my, this is great!
very romantic, passionate....

Suetang
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6 posted 2004-03-03 10:42 PM


muted

You are more than kind, thank you so much.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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7 posted 2004-03-04 07:39 PM


Sue:  Super job on this! You and Jeff work well together.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Martie
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8 posted 2004-03-04 07:43 PM


Such harmony is sweet to read!
Goodknight
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9 posted 2004-03-04 08:00 PM


you two waft harmoniously to our delight - this is great - Paul
Suetang
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10 posted 2004-03-04 08:09 PM


Betty Lou

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this.  It was a wonderful experience to write alongside someone so talented as Jeff.

Martie

I'm so glad you liked our collaboration.

Paul

Your words are so very humbling and I thank you so very much.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2004-03-04 09:55 PM


A beautiful duet.
TD

Startime55
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12 posted 2004-03-04 09:58 PM


CLAPPING LOUDLY!!!!Stunning....I absolutely love the romance and passion of this poem...Well done you two....

BloomingRose
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13 posted 2004-03-04 11:34 PM


Oh how I love romantic poetry!
A well deserved standing ovation!
Is there more to come???

Deb

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14 posted 2004-03-04 11:35 PM


Lovely...James
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15 posted 2004-03-05 08:30 AM


BRAVA!  OUTSTANDING WORK!!
Suetang
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16 posted 2004-03-05 05:04 PM


I am so overwhelmed at the responses and I thank you all sincerely.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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17 posted 2004-03-06 02:27 PM


BothOfYou~
This is just wonderfully blended from two caring souls~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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18 posted 2004-03-06 07:28 PM


nice duet
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