Open Poetry #31 |
Two Hearts In Rhyme (Duet with Ravenwolfvoyager) |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Love is the poetry of my heart Surrendering upon paper my souls art A masterpiece you create in rhyme Toiling with words that breathe through time The radiance of your love will light my way And keep the quill upon its stay Love grows deep inside my heart and soul Keeping the hot embers aflame amongst the hot coal You paint the color of love from your palette Pressing my heart against my chest like an iron mallet You've breathed new life when there was none there And impelled your spell wishing away my earthly cares My heart is always open and you are welcome inside For it is the might of the air to which our destiny rides Take me on a journey far beyond the brightest star Beyond this surrealism of a utopian cast afar Your love has left its mark embedded in my heart Unswayed in the wind before the arrows mark All sense of time is lost as we two become one As the chorus unites through a single voice of love's song Love comes into fruition as I melt into your arms Falling within the cusp of your enthralling charm You whisper words of love as our two hearts unite In silhouette of two before the ever burning candlelight * * * "You have bereft me of words, only my blood speaks to you through my veins" I am in motion |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Bravo! standing ovation, you two, for a wonderful blending of souls |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A masterpiece you create in rhyme Since you leave me speechless, I'll use your words. *S* This is seamless and superb... you harmonize beautifully! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bravo!!! Wonderful duet you two! A beautiful blending which left me breathless! ~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Kacy, suthern & Nancy Thank you so much for your most humbling comments. It was more than a pleasure to write with someone as talented as Jeff. I am in awe of his talent and was so honored to be asked to write alongside him. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh my my my, this is great! very romantic, passionate.... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
muted You are more than kind, thank you so much. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Super job on this! You and Jeff work well together. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Such harmony is sweet to read! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you two waft harmoniously to our delight - this is great - Paul |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Betty Lou Thank you so much for taking the time to read this. It was a wonderful experience to write alongside someone so talented as Jeff. Martie I'm so glad you liked our collaboration. Paul Your words are so very humbling and I thank you so very much. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A beautiful duet. TD |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
CLAPPING LOUDLY!!!!Stunning....I absolutely love the romance and passion of this poem...Well done you two.... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh how I love romantic poetry! A well deserved standing ovation! Is there more to come??? Deb |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
BRAVA! OUTSTANDING WORK!! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I am so overwhelmed at the responses and I thank you all sincerely. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BothOfYou~ This is just wonderfully blended from two caring souls~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice duet |
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