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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Echoes The more I think, the more I sink Into the human echoes link Bouncing in the ancient grime The smallest sound in passing time A moment in eternals chain A moment of the human feign A flicker of a wickers torch A star within celestial’s porch A world within the cry of I A world within a lonely sigh A sprite within a shadows core A lightless light forevermore. Horizons of a figure eight Horizons of an endless state Dimensions held in gravity Enabling mobility My star has shown a thirst for bright And coupled with another light. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The more I think, the more I sink Ah, my friend... you've just written the reason I've decided that living up to my hair color isn't such a bad idea... and could be considered survival tactics. *S* I like this very much, Seymour... you always start our days with excellence. *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
excellent writing my friend Good morning to ya, happy Wed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice, Sy especially loved the last 2 lines hugs M |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely Sy~ I hear the echoes....  ~~**~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"A world within the cry of I A world within a lonely sigh A sprite within a shadows core A lightless light forevermore." Morning Sy! Oooh I do love this keeper. Above is my favourite stanza. Off to brew your tea.  ~Morning hugs & smiles, Nancy~
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Mornin' Sy A lovely read this fine day. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful, so multi-dimensional, so many threads to pull on...~P |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Horizons of a figure eight Horizons of an endless state Dimensions held in gravity Enabling mobility ~*~ Yes, if not in body, in thought alone! Ah Sy, ever wise... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful write Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Seymour I "echoe"all the replies that came before me...enjoyable reading, evry good end lines _________ice ><> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Afternoon, Sy-light! Yours with that of another of similar brilliance would create a supernova to be sure!  Love & superlight, EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Love it love it love it love it~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my wonderful readers I thank you kindly. I am and will be for a while in a tangle of service, all of which limits my time in passions. When I can I will answer individually but at the moment I cannot. Your replies are the desert of my day. And I never go to sleep without desert. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked that poem alot. (; -Juju |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Most excellent Seymour. Maree  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A flicker of a wickers torch A star within celestial’s porch ==================================== you get cooler by the couplet my sweet Sy-babers... for this you get extra "dessert" LOL and extra winkies.   |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
This one is truly special, Sir Sy! Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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