Open Poetry #31 |
Realization |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Realization No longer needed, in silent message, one, I have finally received. Eyes tired of searching for reasons, heart worn thin, emotions disintegrating, unmasked and unable to heal the pain of loss. Carrying the wait upon shoulders heavy with care, turning up the music loud enough to drown out thoughts that follow my footsteps trying to catch up and reside where the darkness embraces. Last chance days when it reigns tears of forgetting, to leave behind unanswered questions, knowing that only I read between the lines of broken trust and march into Spring alone, as always. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sad Maureen...but you are telling your heart..as it is now..hope things turn brighter soon... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Mauren, what a powerful, beautiful write! This touches me deeply. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow , this touched me more than you know Maureen , for I too have been searching reasons of unanswered questions.... in fact just been trying to write about it too Hope |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
no burden close in weight emotions ever stretching literal botomless bag you write it well "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Maureen Your words almost broke my heart. You deserve so much love and happiness my friend. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sad thoughts written from I think, a very delicate heart. Hugs, Deb |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
beautiful "So what befalls the flawless? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This really aches Maureen... things will turn around soon...have faith. Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Maureen, this is a great poem! I pray for good things to happen for you! Grover. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Even in the saddest of your works Maureen, there is a grace and light that always dawns, and I always come away from the read deeper and more thoughtful. Hugs, TD |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
This is so sad it brought tears to my eyes... I'd give ya a real hug but this will hafta do... |
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