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EternitysHorizon
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Twilight's Orchestra

0 posted 2004-03-03 09:58 PM


cloaked gentle glowing light Guides
how many steps thousands vertical
                               Seek
footfalls handgrasps fingernail grips
redemption how high dearest twilight
                               Seeking
snow hides ice impales appendgaes yet
frozen near unblooded silent voice speaks
                                  Find
rose red abloom framed in snow white blinding
Science gone morninglories open in moonlight
                                    Found
The Mountain of Forever all lit the gentlest
light illumaniting new one barefoot walks snow

                                    

"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-03-03 10:12 PM


How write of one might lead
       searching
question answer twilight midnight
       glowing
applause laughing bowing
       knowing
mentors smiling, laughing
       bowing

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-03-03 10:15 PM


Donovan, I'll return to this one a bit later. Perhaps a cup of tea will help me climb this mountain of thought and imagery, which at first glance seems disjointed.
Be back later

Sadelite
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3 posted 2004-03-03 10:46 PM


EternitysHorizon,
  Your work gets me.  It is very sophicated in thought and depth.  I must make a return trip here when more able.  You have an incredible mind.  Thank you for sharing it.
                 Sadie

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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4 posted 2004-03-03 11:16 PM


In the first flow...
Seek, Seeking, Find...found

This is great.  The mind flows this way to found. TD

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