Open Poetry #31 |
Twilight Guide |
EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
cloaked gentle glowing light Guides how many steps thousands vertical Seek footfalls handgrasps fingernail grips redemption how high dearest twilight Seeking snow hides ice impales appendgaes yet frozen near unblooded silent voice speaks Find rose red abloom framed in snow white blinding Science gone morninglories open in moonlight Found The Mountain of Forever all lit the gentlest light illumaniting new one barefoot walks snow "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How write of one might lead searching question answer twilight midnight glowing applause laughing bowing knowing mentors smiling, laughing bowing |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Donovan, I'll return to this one a bit later. Perhaps a cup of tea will help me climb this mountain of thought and imagery, which at first glance seems disjointed. Be back later |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
EternitysHorizon, Your work gets me. It is very sophicated in thought and depth. I must make a return trip here when more able. You have an incredible mind. Thank you for sharing it. Sadie |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the first flow... Seek, Seeking, Find...found This is great. The mind flows this way to found. TD |
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