Open Poetry #31 |
Sun and Moon |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Moonbeams dance and play in night’s far distant sky, free again from bondage or once again alive, but the sun unaware has disappeared somewhere and sleeps until awoken to the reality of life. Dictated to by need sun meets the passing moon and a passionate encounter ceases all too soon but the sun is energized and forced to inculcate the power of the moon’s deep emotive mood. Through a once hard and solid tough veneer love grows and sets itself into the atmosphere and hovers on the outskirts of new territories like a woman’s tears on the edge of knowing fear. Energy released burns anguish into peace but the center-piece of love remains a masterpiece! Helen / 2 March 2004 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this very good |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks passing shadows for the read and your kind comment. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh, i like this.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen Beautiful, as always! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I like this a lot - so well done - thanks - Paul |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
And thank you all so much for reading! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Such beauty fills your words, sweet friend, peace indeed sings in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I really like your work! Thank you for sharing it with us. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
And in the end..... Energy released burns anguish into peace but the center-piece of love remains a masterpiece! Your writing is all that, my dear Helen~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, I really liked your perspective here! Beautiful picture. ....jo |
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