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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-03-03 01:37 PM

When you dream of the ocean, the beach and the waves,
does your heart and mind sense the essence of me?
In your mind’s eye, what do you see?
Can you feel that I’m an integral part
of this ocean of reality?

Have you ever stood on a beach,
let the waves ripple ‘round your legs,
felt the wet sand suck your feet down
further with each new wave that washed ashore?
Did you listen to the waves curl and break
upon themselves and the shoreline?
Do you remember noisey flocking seagulls searching for food?
Can you feel the temperature of the waters
and the salty taste of a misty spray on a windy day?
Do you feel yourself stepping over fine and rough pebbles, broken shells
as your mind feels the tangle of kelp as it floats
within the flotsam and jetsom upon the rolling waves?
Does your nose twitch with recall
the smell of a red tide at sunset?

When you dream of the ocean, the beach and the waves,
are your heart and mind open to feel and to see?
In your mind’s eye, can you sense the essence of me?
For I am an integral part
of this ocean of 3D reality.

*
May ripples of LOVE
become waves of PEACE

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2004-03-03 01:44 PM

Wow! I love this. I can almost smell the sea. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2004-03-03 02:50 PM

Sights and sounds abound in this write. Images and emotions strongly presented. Well done!

believe in what your heart feels...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-03-03 03:46 PM

Kacy~
You took me right there~
Lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-03-03 04:02 PM

"When you dream of the ocean, the beach and the waves,
are your heart and mind open to feel and to see?
In your mind’s eye, can you sense the essence of me?
For I am an integral part
of this ocean of 3D reality."

Oh my Kacy...how wonderful this is!
Fantastic use of imagery, well done.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-03-03 04:08 PM

A very nice poem with clear images! Grover.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2004-03-03 05:06 PM

Chris, Marge, Scorpio, Nancy, Grover,
thank you for your replies!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-03-03 05:36 PM

Kacy, this was pheonominal; I really felt like I was walking along the beach with you!

...jo

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