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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-03-03 09:57 AM


I used my dreams
    Like wishes for you
One wish worships
    As the other two do
All the heart can hold
    You poured into my veins
Productive fruit of beauty still forever remains
    With each squeeze of paint
I pealed in your hands
    Purring music with observation
Our lonely thoughts companioned
    Ovations of Sunday Morning
That now the senses see
    Dependent for your savvy
Stripping flesh of prose to be
    Please perch me on your shoulder
Like lovers in the fling
    Of season’s change with loveliness
A collection of doubling poems
    A whimsical word
Your melody, fee-falling verse & song
    Peculiar magic framed in grace
Combining artistic binding, for all human race
    You are peace of the ardent summer night
That warmly touches my face embracing me tight
     A fine collection of a silver sky
Bound forever, in the depths of your eyes
    You, golden leaves that tango in fall
Lost in complete slumber and thought
    You smile me into a space
Where rhythmically sand meets waves
A vineyard of voice trailing mid air
     Unfurling colors which join in burning sierra
The fragrance of delicate intangible memory
    You are the spirit that purely graced me
A violin hushed breathlessly feeding
    Enchanting prosper in every word of cadence
You are the sincerity in each negative mind
    The idea of a famous painted picture
By the greats of all times
    You are the today in my smiling mind


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just out of reach
1 posted 2004-03-03 10:20 AM


The fragrance of delicate intangible memory
    You are the spirit that purely graced me
A violin hushed breathlessly feeding
    Enchanting prosper in every word of cadence
You are the sincerity in each negative mind
    The idea of a famous painted picture
By the greats of all times
    You are the today in my smiling mind


Lee, what a lovely write this is to read first thing this morning. Thankyou for starting my day on such a peaceful note. hugs, Chris

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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2 posted 2004-03-03 10:27 AM


wonderfully written...

regards
sudhir

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-03-03 10:28 AM


Nice work! Grover.
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-03-03 10:42 AM


Lee~
If you open a window ... surely you will hear a *sigh* from Florida~

This is beauty ... sheer beauty of poetic thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Kicking Kim
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5 posted 2004-03-03 11:40 AM


"A fine collection of a silver sky
bound forever, in the depths of your eyes."

^~Lee~^
This was a lovely heartfelt poem.  I have a strong incling that it may be about perhaps your child?!...I could be a million years away from the truth but it was such a beautiful read.  Well done with this one, it was amazing!

^*~Kimberley~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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