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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-03-01 05:38 PM

Across The Sea

When the moon shines
over the Makakilo Cliffs.
While the waves crash
onto the shores of Waikiki.
That's when I think of her,
as I hope she thinks of me.
While I swim in the warm
bays of Ko Olina, or
climb Diamond Head to
look across the sea,
that's when I miss
you, my sweetheart,
and I hope you're
missing me.

JamesLee
March01
2004

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-03-01 06:11 PM

Now this...is a gem....

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2004-03-01 06:56 PM

Very nice James lots of feeling.

Eric

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-03-01 08:38 PM

You are blessed to live in such a beautiful place-- a paradise. I hope the one you love is responsive to you! Grover.

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

4 posted 2004-03-01 11:03 PM

hope she finds this/you and reads it

Sorry about the Missing...

dale

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-03-02 01:58 AM

Sounds like you're missing her very much, James -- liked the elements entertwined in your writing.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-03-02 02:23 AM

why wouldn't she?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2004-03-02 10:41 PM

(big angel hugs) God Bless You, dearest friend, I understand these emotions ever too well and I hope soon everytime you're reminded of loves bliss you are there with your love hand in hand, you are so deserving of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-03-02 10:42 PM

James..this one is SO beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-03-03 09:39 AM

Across the sea love flows from your heart to hers ... thoughts are energy and travel instantly!

I love this.
Margherita

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

10 posted 2004-03-03 10:05 AM

James this is such a sweet little poem, like a spoonful of sugar. You write so beautifully. I thankyou for allowing us all to explore a piece of your mind.

^*Kimberley*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2004-03-03 11:48 AM

beautiful written, thought and felt

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