Open Poetry #31 |
From Stillness |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
First...nothing moved. There was a deep hush that lay between us. We didn't allow ourselves to speak...for words would have simply fallen useless to the subtle understanding of this silence. Then...there was a stirring. Perhaps the tremor began along the fingers...or the flesh rose to meet some unborn touch. It doesn't matter...for anticipation is the hope of every movement. Desire moved slowly. It was as if our pleasures paused in a momentary confinement. And we followed each moment with its every brief passage. First...nothing moved. From stillness there was born a holy motion. And now...there is only what continues. Eric [This message has been edited by Ericc (02-22-2004 09:22 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done Eric, like the slow unfolding of this, the feel of each sense entering into the moment. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hey Eric Your words presented a beautiful picture that was very much enjoyed. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"It was as if our pleasures paused in a momentary confinement. And we followed each moment with its every brief passage. First...nothing moved. From stillness there was born a holy motion. And now...there is only what continues." Absolutely beautiful Eric! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very lovely -- holy motion, I liked that! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! what a moment! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Time stands still on these occassions...well done. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a stunningly beautiful song of creation, dear Eric! From stillness there was born a holy motion I watch in awe as beauty unfolds through the touch of your desire. I love you, Margherita |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A most excellent work! Grover. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Holy motion...wow, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I think you might have coined a whole new term or concept here, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
From stillness there was born a holy motion. And now...there is only what continues. ~~ you do continue to amaze.....such a softness to this.... ~~**~~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done Eric. I enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
First...nothing moved. From stillness there was born a holy motion. ~*~ I get a vast feeling from this, as if I am again overlooking the ocean from high atop a mountain. I like the feeling this leaves with me... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Magnificent....soul stering...loved it.. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(sigh) ............Thats the story of my life. just kidding. Brings back memories though. -Juju |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Well, Merlin... I certainly think "holy motion" might just be a new catchphrase! This is, of course, exquisite. Can't wait to see it all bound and spiffy in your new book. Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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